Adventures That Score!

2012-02-21T08:30:00.000-08:00

It's been awhile since I've blogged. Have been pursuing those goals. Most likely I will need to add a new one to that list, but I'm still thinking about it.

You know when you think your life is going one way, and then something significant happens to change your plans? I sort of feel like that's been building up for sometime now and I've been sort of waiting on the sidelines. Well, the moment has happened and now I have to "sh!t or get off the pot" as my grandma used to say.

Things are changing, and we writers have to stay diligent if we want to pursue our goals (not dreams - writing is NEVER a dream).

So keep your fingers crossed, send prayers, good vibes, or whatever it is you do as I figure out what I should be doing.

My 2012 Goals

2012-01-23T05:12:00.000-08:00

The end of 2011 really had me thinking about what I wanted as a writer and as a woman. I'd just started a new job for a non-profit and was unsure of my role. My job at the publisher was continuing as always, so no changes there. I was feeling very overwhelmed with life between two jobs (the non-profit especially because I loved it and it becoming more than I had ever thought possible), a husband, two kids, two dogs, a house that was consistently dirty, and a manuscript that was supposed to be finished. My wonderful agent was having no luck selling any of my manuscripts, and my self-published book had very slow sales.

Being a mother just makes me naturally want to take care of others. This is good and this is bad. The other people love that about me - especially since it spills over into other areas that have nothing to do with my family. But this is bad because I rarely have time to take care of myself.

2012 is the year of Kris taking care of herself.

Here are my 2012 goals:
1. Join a bible study (done)
2. Make my writing a priority
3. Only say "yes" to opportunities that I really want, not say "yes" because I feel I have to
4. Spend quality time with my husband and kids outside of sports (this will be hard!)
5. Meditate
6. Practice yoga
7. Forgive myself if I don't get everything done (another hard one!)
8. Cultivate the friendships I have that are meaningful to me
9. Remember to say "I love you" even to my friends
10. To not worry

I think the hardest one for me with be #3. I like to be involved and many times will volunteer for something or accept someone's request because I feel it's my "duty". That gets me in a lot of trouble - I end up doing things that I really don't want to. By giving myself permission to only say yes when I want to, I think the quality of my life, and of my family's, will increase.

There are several of us who are taking this pledge. To see the full list and to give encouragement throughout the year, please visit Sheri's blog.

Rebel Writer's Pledge 2012

2012-01-03T05:26:00.000-08:00

I saw this on Sheri Larsen's blog, Writer's Ally. I'm always looking for something to spur me into blogging. Here's the premise:

"That's what the Rebel Writer's Pledge is all about: rebel against our views from last year that hindered us from reaching our goals, and give us new insight and a fresh start. I started it last year, and figured it was a good way to join us as writers, committing goals and support to each other. Only this year, I'm making it a BLOG HOP."

So either click on the sidebar badge or hop on over to Sheri's blog to join in the rebellion. I did.

Happy 2012!

2012-01-01T17:20:00.000-08:00

Happy New Year!

I hope you had a safe holiday season. It's difficult for me to believe that today is the first day of 2012. Time - as in "the years" - is flying by. I can still remember when I worked in the mortgage industry and there was such panic over the whole Y2K business. Look at us now - 12 years later!

I apologize for my lack of blogs. My second job over at Living Stations has really become my primary job. I love it, so no complaints! If you're in the Metro Detroit area and are a Christian, I urge you to take a look at our website and learn more about Living Stations.

I've been doing a lot of thinking about my 2012 goals. I have the usual ones - lose some weight, take more time for myself - but I'm want to make one even more important than those other two - be happy. For the most part, I'm pretty happy, but I think I can be happier. Another one is be grateful each day. So many out there have nothing, and I really have so much. Being grateful each day will definitely make me happy.

What about you? What goals have you set that are not the norm?

I'm being GREEN people!

2011-12-01T05:17:00.000-08:00

If you're looking to buy the print copy of Saving Redwind, you'll have to wait a few more days. I decided to change the spacing of the interior, thus reducing some pages (need to be green, people!) and then I was able to lower the price by a buck! As soon as I get the review copy, you'll be able to get YOUR copy!

Not too late to join in the discussion - Pantser vs. Plotter

2011-11-29T05:22:00.000-08:00

Yesterday was a whirlwind of a day for me. I forgot to post that I'm over at Ciara Knight's blog talking about Pantsers vs. Plotters. The post is still up and if you're inclined to head over there, I'll be sure to answer any comment you leave.

A Writer's Dream

2011-11-25T07:02:00.000-08:00

I have been out of the social media circles this past month or so because I've taken on another job - Editor in Chief of Living Stations, of Living Faith-Fine Arts Apostolate. I am extremely happy with this new venture, even though, along with my editor/project manager responsibilities at Nelson Publishing & Marketing, I have very little brain energy left for much else at the end of the day. That being said, I haven't stopped writing, but it's a much slower process these days and honestly, I'm not always inspired. I am so very happy with Living Stations that I often think that that is what I'm supposed to be doing - not writing books for young readers.

But then something incredible happened. A 5th grade teacher read my book to her class and they LOVED it. A whole class. Like more than one kid - and girls loved it just as much as boys. I've had a few kids tell me they like the book - but most of them are children of my friends. With having two boys of my own, I know that kids will say what they think (and not necessarily what their parents want them to say), so I know that they're not trying to make me feel good when they tell me they like Saving Redwind.

But a whole class where neither of my kids attend? Way cool!

I found out about this because a wonderful author, Lisa Gail Green, tweeted about the blog post yesterday on Thanksgiving. With that wonderful little @KrisYankee tag, I saw the tweet and immediately headed over to Leslie Rose's blog. I was stunned. And what was so cool was that Leslie posted questions/comments from the kids. I had a blast answering them!

Later last night, after my belly was stuffed with turkey, squash, 7-layer salad, and pretzel jello (YUM), my agent called. Crazy. She should be spending time with her family and taking a much needed break. But no. She called because she'd been thinking about me for the past week, especially after an email of me alluding to my happiness with my current job situation and speculating if this was my real calling. She wanted to make sure that I understood the potential impact of my work on readers. That I needed to keep "hanging on" and to keep writing. It was wonderful to hear her voice and her words of encouragement.

So, what does all of this mean? Book contracts are awesome, and I hope that someday I will have one. But writing is such a personal activity. We pour our hearts and souls into the words and are often met with rejection after rejection. Saving Redwind wasn't bought by a publisher. I only put it out there through Createspace/Smashwords because my agent wanted that story available to readers. I was hesitant to self-publish. If I hadn't taken that leap, I wouldn't have touched the lives of that 5th grade class.

And that's a writer's dream - to touch the reader and maybe make some sort of impact, even if it's just that they want to read more.

Thanks to Leslie Rose's 5th grade class. You guys are A.W.E.S.O.M.E.!

Happy Thanksgiving!

2011-11-23T10:47:00.000-08:00

I love this image and wanted to share. I hope and pray that you will have a wonderful and safe holiday with people who you love, and who love you. The holiday season can be especially difficult for some, in a variety of ways. Take a moment to say a prayer for those you know and those you don't. Tell someone why you're grateful for them being in your life. And, remember not to eat too much!

Monday (11/28), I'll be a guest blogger over at Ciara Knight's blog. I'm hoping you'll stop by and say hello.

Peace!

Guest Post - Susan Kaye Quinn - Her new book is out TODAY!!

2011-11-01T04:09:00.000-07:00

Meet Rafael Lobos Santos, Mindreader

by Susan Kaye Quinn, author of Open Minds (Book One of the Mindjack Trilogy)

In my new young adult paranormal/SF novel Open Minds (Book One of the Mindjack Trilogy), everyone reads minds, except one girl.

Sixteen-year-old Kira Moore is a zero, someone who can’t read thoughts or be read by others. Zeros are outcasts who can’t be trusted, leaving her no chance with Raf, a regular mindreader and the best friend she secretly loves. When she accidentally controls Raf’s mind and nearly kills him, Kira tries to hide her frightening new ability from her family and an increasingly suspicious Raf. But lies tangle around her, and she’s dragged deep into a hidden world of mindjackers, where having to mind control everyone she loves is just the beginning of the deadly choices before her.

For this guest post, I went undercover as a regular mindreader working for the school’s morning tru-cast to interview Rafael Lobos Santos, a mindreading character in Open Minds (Note: I’m not this evil in real life; I just like to torment my characters).

Me: Raf, thanks for agreeing to do this interview with me!

Raf: (*tunes out stray thoughts from other students in the after school club meeting*) Sure. But I don't know why you want to interview me.

Me: Are you kidding? You were the rage of the morning tru-casts all last year: Sophomore Soccer Kicker Brings State Trophy To Hometown!

Raf: (*blushes*) Yeah, well, it was a team effort.

Me: But you were the star! Tell me, have you been working on some new strategies over the summer? Got some more synchronized plays like you sprung during the Championship Game?

Raf: (*grins*) Well, I did spend most of the summer at camp with the New Metro Flyers. It was very mesh. (*grin fades*) Although I missed being at home, you know? I'm really a homebody kind of guy.

Two girls cast daring looks at Raf and their mental admirations whisper by.

Me: Looks like you're not the only one glad you're back. So, do you have a favorite among your adoring fans?

Raf: What do you mean?

Me: Oh, come on! Inquiring minds want to know! Soccer superstar like you, but no girlfriend? Everyone's dying to know if you found someone while you were away for the summer! Or are you still on the market?

Raf: (*sighs*) I don't have a girlfriend.

Me: Well, that won’t last long. (*Raf doesn’t have a girlfriend, Raf doesn’t have a girlfriend echoes through the reader minds in the room.) So, is there any hope for your many fans? Anyone in particular you'd like to share more than just thoughts with?

Raf: (*scowls*) Not at the moment.

Me: No? Rumor has it that you've got eyes for that zero ...

Raf: Hey! Don't call her that ...

Me: Ah, you know who I mean. Sorry. It's just ... how can you trust someone like that, much less think about touching her? I mean, you have no idea what she's thinking. She could be plotting your murder or secretly torturing kittens.

Raf: (*clenches jaw*) Stop it.

Me: Oh, come on! Everyone's thinking it. Maybe the soccer hero isn’t quite so heroic. Maybe he likes girls who haven't gone through the change ...

Raf: This interview is over.

Me: Does that mean you don't like her? Can I tru-quote you on that?

Raf: (*walks away*)

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Thanks for letting me share a little bit of Raf’s (and Kira’s) world with you. To find out more, you can check out the first chapter of Open Minds.

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See more guest posts about Open Minds at the Virtual Launch Party!

When everyone reads minds, a secret is a dangerous thing to keep.

Open Minds (Book One of the Mindjack Trilogy) by Susan Kaye Quinn is available for $2.99 in e-book (Amazon US (also UK, France and Germany), Barnes & Noble, Smashwords) and $9.99 in print (Amazon, Createspace, also autographed copies available from the author).

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Three ways to enter (you can have multiple entries):

1) Leave a comment here or at the Virtual Launch Party post

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Reviews

2011-10-13T18:23:00.000-07:00

It's hard to ask for reviews from people who don't know me. Those are the ones that I expect to be the most honest. They don't have a relationship with me. They don't care what my reaction will be. They don't have to listen to me gripe and complain about the state of the publishing industry. They don't know how much their words mean to me.

So when I get two reviews from two people who fit all of the criteria above and they both didn't say that Saving Redwind sucked, I'm pretty happy. I'm a rather insecure writer. If you know me or attended one of my writing workshops, that statement might seem odd. I'm very comfortable as an editor. I can see the strengths and weaknesses in others' writing. And the fact that I've worked on almost 30 books (many of them award winning) makes me feel safe and secure with my editing hat.

But as a writer, not so much. Especially a writer who decided to self-publish. Other than my agent (who is awesome), there wasn't a panel of people that said, "KRIS YANKEE!! YOU ARE THE BEST. WE MUST BUY YOUR BOOK AND PUBLISH IT!"

My point: all writers need validation. Here's some of mine:

From Simplistik Halloz Books

http://www.simplistik.org/shbooks/?p=229

Saving Redwind – Kris Yankee

By LizzieBeth

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Saving Redwind by Kris Yankee
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
Having moved to a new place, Nick Stevenson yearns for adventure. To see new sights and more of the world just like his father. But sometimes things don’t work out the way he wants them to.
When things start happening and his ceiling starts turning into some sort of storm, Nick wonders if he’s losing his mind. Perhaps he’s asked for more than he’s bargained for in wanting an adventure. As he ponders this thought, a boy shows up asking him for help in saving his world – one known as Redwind. While everything inside cries out that the boy’s request is completely unbelievable, Nick agrees and is sucked into the very wallpaper within his room. Thrown into an extraordinary world that takes him by surprise, Nick tries to grasp the meaning behind the boys odd request.
Having always considered himself as no one special, he’s completely blown away by the fact that the people he comes to meet are relying on him to set all wrongs to right. With time being of the essence, Nick does his best to do as he is asked, praying that he’ll have enough time to complete the objectives that have been set out before him.

Battling his doubts and insecurities, as well as the obstacles that have been strewn across his path, Nick finds it within himself to give it his all while trying to save a world that has come to mean more to him than he ever imagined. A world that seems more real as the minutes pass by.

While this is a children’s book, it’s truly an enjoyable read. So much so, that once you start, it’s hard to put down. Kris weaves such a delightful tale that you find yourself wanting to know more about what happens to Nick and the friend’s that he’s made along the way. I truly recommend reading this book.

Midwest Book Reviewers: Reviewer's Bookwatch, October
http://www.midwestbookreview.com/rbw/oct_11.htm#burroughs
Saving Redwind
Kris Yankee
Privately Published
9781463616670, $8.95, www.amazon.com

Wallpaper doesn't seem like the most exciting thing, but for Nick Stevenson, it may as well be. "Saving Redwind" follows eleven year old Nick finds something unusual beyond his bedroom's wallpaper, and finds himself in another world. Finding an adventure of his own, he finds that their continued existence may just rely on him to succeed. "Saving Redwind" is a fine read, not to be overlooked for young fiction readers.

What do you think?

Confessions of a Contest Judge

2011-10-04T19:15:00.000-07:00

I've only entered two contests. One of them I placed. The other, I received no feedback. Come to think of it, the one I placed in never sent me feedback either. Hmph. I bet they still don't have their judging sheets from 2004.

I don't remember how I got involved with contest judging. I think maybe back when I was writing women's fiction and was frequenting the Romance Divas. I probably offered to judge and was taken up on it.

I've judged the same contest - I won't tell you which one because, well, you know - for many years now. Last year, I changed my email address and forgot to tell the coordinators. I found one of their messages while cleaning out my inbox and gave them my new email address. Voila, I'm back in their queue again.

This year I'm judging YA. And, it's interesting......yeah, let's go with that.

Why am I being so vague? Or maybe you can't tell, but I sorta am.

Let me tell you first off, I like YA. I don't really like the whole dystopia, end-of-the-world drama, but I like the freedom that YA authors have in certain aspects that MG writers don't have. That being said, though, it doesn't matter the genre, the rules of writing still apply.

Even though I'm given a judging score sheet, here are the things that I look for when judging a partial (I wonder how closely it resembles to what agents and acquiring editors look for...):

Does it grab me from the beginning?
Can I relate to the characters?
Is the storyline fresh and intriguing?
Is the story beliveable?
Do I care about what happens to the characters?
Are the basic mechanics used correctly (point of view, scene/sequel, character and setting development)?
Have I already figured out what is going to happen?
Am I still interested after the first page? the last page?
Can I visualize each character, maybe even the cover of the book? (that last part is a weird one, but if I can, then I know I've got a great story in my hands)
Is there an audience for the storyline?
Does the story have value?

Do you ever ask yourself these questions after you've finished a manuscript? Are you even able to - meaning, are you too close to the story to be able to judge it for yourself?

Being an editor and a contest judge hasn't gotten me any closer to real publication (and I say real meaning NYC publication. I can attest that the Saving Redwind books I have next to me are VERY real.) But I do think it gives me a unique perspective on the mechanics of my own writing. Hey, I'm not saying I'm anything special. No way, no how. Just that with all of the editing practice I get, I can actually distance myself from my manuscript to see if there is value.

So, if I can tell you anything from being a contest judge, it's this:
Have a keen eye when you are reviewing your manuscript. If you can't distance yourself from it, give it to a good critique partner or beta reader for their comments (not their changes, but their comments) and not a family member, friend, or someone who swoons because you've written a book. Someone who is also a writer.

I've been splattered on a Graffiti wall!

2011-10-03T04:12:00.000-07:00

Sheri Larsen of Writers' Ally has graciously let me visit her graffiti wall. Come on over and see what all the splat is about!

Blog tour continues...

2011-09-30T04:30:00.000-07:00

I'm over at the wonderful Donna Cummings' blog today talking about story problem. Please come by and let me know if you are conscious of your story problem when you begin a new manuscript.

Completely off the topic of writing

2011-09-29T06:32:00.000-07:00

Okay, so I have to say this because it's bugging me...what is up with all of these new musicians who feel that they need to state their name at the beginning of their song? Is it because they are afraid that no one will know who they are if they don't include their name? Or maybe, they just have that big of an ego that they have to have the world sing their name?

I have Sirius XM and I listen to Hits 1 on 2, channel 3 or 10 (can't remember what the names of channel 3 and 10 are for the moment), and also listen to the 80s, 90s, Alt Nation, Rewind, etc. (love me some old punk and alt music). Channels 2 and 3 play mostly the same stuff, and 10 plays songs from the 2000s. But what is the phenom of singers having their name in the song lyrics. And why does this bug me so much?

Do you notice this or is it just me?

I'm over here today!

2011-09-28T08:01:00.001-07:00

Holy smokes....I almost forgot that I'm over at Chris Eboch's blog today talking about writing and Saving Redwind. Guess getting up at 4am has its disadvantages! Please come visit me (of course after you've checked out the blog post below about Pete Morin's new book!) so I won't be too lonely!

Pete Morin's Diary of a Small Fish is now availalbe!

2011-09-28T07:58:00.000-07:00

I wanted to share with you a fellow BCer (that's Book Cents) whose book is out today! Please check the blurb below and Pete's bio. Links to his book are at the end of the post. Thanks!

When Paul Forte is indicted by a federal grand jury, everyone suspects prosecutor Bernard (don’t call him “Bernie”) Kilroy has more on his mind than justice. Then the FBI agent in charge of Paul’s case gives him a clue to the mystery: Kilroy is bent on settling an old family score, and he’s not above breaking the law to do it.

Paul is already dealing with the death of his parents and divorce from a woman he still loves. Now, with the support of an alluring grand juror, Paul must expose the vindictive prosecutor’s own corruption before the jury renders a verdict on his Osso Buco.

Author bio:

Pete Morin has been a trial attorney, a politician, a bureaucrat, a lobbyist, and a witness (voluntary and subpoenaed) to countless outrages. He combines them all in this debut novel.

Pete’s short fiction has appeared in NEEDLE, A Magazine of Noir, Words With Jam, 100 Stories for Haiti, and Words to Music. He published many of them in a collection titled Uneasy Living, available on Amazon and Smashwords.

When he is not writing crime fiction or legal mumbo jumbo, Pete plays blues guitar in Boston bars, enjoys the beach, food and wine with his wife, Elizabeth, and their two adult children, and on rare occasion, punches a fade wedge to a tight pin surrounded by sand or water. He lives in a money pit on the seacoast south of Boston, in an area once known as the Irish Riviera.

Pete is represented by Christine Witthohn of Book Cents Literary Agency.

Diary of a Small Fish is available on Amazon and Smashwords.

Finally back to writing...

2011-09-26T12:34:00.000-07:00

Well, I hadn't really stopped. I'd been tweaking the MG survival story and now have delivered that to my awesome agent. Now, I'm finally back to the YA that I promised the screenwriter I'd have finished by November.

Who wants to bet me that I can get about 52k down by then?

Author in the Locker Room: Chris Eboch

2011-09-22T04:00:00.000-07:00

The locker room is all cleaned again (!) and I'm so happy to have MG author, Chris Eboch, here talking about her new book, The Eyes of Pharoah. Please give Chris a high-five!

What kind of research did you do for this book?

I’ve been fascinated by ancient Egypt since I was a kid. Plus, I grew up in Saudi Arabia, so I have some familiarity with the Middle East, and my family visited Egypt when I was in my 20s.

The Eyes of Pharaoh is actually the second novel I’ve written set in ancient Egypt. The first one still needs major revisions, so I’m not sure when (if ever) I might get it out, but I was able to use much of that earlier research. I have at least a dozen books on ancient Egypt on my bookshelf, including several of the Time-Life books about how people lived, with lots of pictures. I also did a lot of library research, and I’ve been to several museum exhibits.

What is the most surprising thing you learned from your research?

One thing that intrigues me about history is how some of the lessons of the past resonate today. My first novel, The Well of Sacrifice, is an adventure/drama set in 9^th-century Mayan times. I explored some of the reasons the Mayan civilization collapsed, such as environmental degradation and too much money flowing to the government and away from the people. For The Eyes of Pharaoh, I touched on issues such as illegal immigration and the dangers of a country thinking it’s the best and most powerful country in the world, and therefore untouchable. It’s almost creepy how some of these themes still affect us. Sometimes I wonder if we’ll ever learn from the mistakes of the past, but I hope my books will get people thinking a little harder about these issues.

What is your normal writing day like? Where do you write? What things do you need (silence? music? the cat?) in order to write?

I check e-mail while eating breakfast and drinking my tea. Then if I’m working on a novel, I’ll try to write a chapter. That usually drains my creative energy, so in the afternoon I work on nonfiction articles, blog posts, critiques, publicity, or errands.

I usually write directly onto the computer, though if I’m struggling I like to take a walk with my miniature digital tape recorder and dictate. I find that the rhythm of walking helps me focus. Once I start that way, I can usually head back to the computer and keep going. I use voice recognition software, so dictating my work isn’t uncomfortable for me. I don’t listen to music, since it would interfere with the voice recognition, but I prefer quiet anyway.

I don’t have a pet right now, but I do enjoy having a window that looks out on a bit of nature, so I can watch the birds or any other critters that wander by.

What is your writing process like?

Over the years I’ve gotten better at using outlines. Now I prefer to start with them, as it saves me a lot of time and frustration during the writing process. That means I’ll spend several weeks brainstorming before I start writing, and I’ll also do any necessary research in advance. Once I start writing, I generally set a daily word count goal – about a chapter, which is 1500 words for a middle grade novel and 2500 words for an adult novel. As long as I don’t have too many distractions, like speaking engagements, I’m fairly successful in meeting those goals. Then I take a few weeks for editing, and maybe a break between books to catch up on other things.

Did you choose your genre, or did your genre choose you?

Writing middle grade novels seemed like a natural fit to me. I read an enormous amount as a kid, and I still enjoy reading children’s books. It fits my style, partly natural and partly based on journalism training, with a focus on simple, clear language and plenty of action and dialogue to keep the pages turning.

A couple of years ago, I was starting to feel restless and wanted a change. I realized I had mostly been reading adult romantic suspense novels. I decided to try one, and eventually published Rattled. It was fun to do something new, plus I got to draw on my passion for my local New Mexico landscape and activities such as hiking and wilderness exploration. I have another romantic suspense with my agent, and I’m ready to start a third, which will involve falconry and a murder.

I also write articles about writing, teach writing through a correspondence school, lead workshops, and offer private critique services. I enjoy teaching, and I learn a lot from analyzing other people’s manuscripts. I recently put together a book called Advanced Plotting, designed to help intermediate and advanced writers write stronger manuscripts.

I’m also looking forward to seeing the fourth book in my middle grade Haunted series, The Ghost Miner’s Treasure, come out next year. I expect my future will hold a combination of writing for children and for adults, plus teaching and editing.

What one piece of advice would you give aspiring writers?

Take classes and get professional feedback. Most people try to submit their work long before they’re writing at a professional level. You’ll save yourself frustration if you focus on learning to write better for a few years before you worry about the submission process.

Describe your book in 140 characters or less...

The Eyes of Pharaoh brings ancient Egypt to life as three friends investigate a plot against the Pharaoh.

Where can readers find your books?

Readers can learn about all of my books and order them on my Amazon page: http://www.amazon.com/Chris-Eboch/e/B001JS25VE/. They can also read excerpts of my children’s books at www.chriseboch.com, learn about my romantic suspense novels at www.krisbock.com, or get writing tips and excerpts from Advanced Plotting on my blog, http://chriseboch.blogspot.com/.

Chris Eboch's novels for ages nine and up include The Eyes of Pharaoh, a mystery in ancient Egypt; The Well of Sacrifice, a Mayan adventure; and the Haunted series, which starts with The Ghost on the Stairs. Her book Advanced Plotting helps writers fine-tune their plots. Learn more at www.chriseboch.com or check out her writing tips at http://chriseboch.blogspot.com/. Chris also writes for adults under the name Kris Bock. Rattled launches her new romantic suspense series featuring treasure hunting adventures in the New Mexico wilderness. Read the first three chapters at www.krisbock.com.

Split Personality today

2011-09-16T05:09:00.000-07:00

Hey, my blog tour continues and I'm over at two blogs today! If you get a chance, please head over to Heather Cashman's blog and then why not drop by Robyn Campbell's blog. It was a lot of fun answering their questions.

Author in the Locker room: Heather Cashman!!!

2011-09-14T04:09:00.000-07:00

Today I've cleaned up the locker room and have invited Young Adult writer, Heather Cashman, to talk about writing and her book, Perception. Please welcome Heather as we always do here with a high-five and a "what's up, dude?"

Kris: What are you most proud of accomplishing in your life at this point?

Heather: Staying sane with three teenagers living in my house. Second would be staying married for almost 20 years (which has really been a lot of fun). Third would be writing a book.

Kris: Perception is a survival story of twins trying to find their way through a land where deceit and treachery rule, but it’s also a love story. How did you come up with the storyline?

Heather: I'm not sure I did. I knew what Ardana and Kade were like, their personalities, their back-story. Then my imagination ran wild. I have no idea where that stuff came from. The characters dictate what they will do next, and Ardana is so impetuous. I suppose the bottom line is that, when you know the characters' motivations, you can see what will happen, what they will do to get what they want or need, and how that's going to impact those around them.

Kris: Having the ability to hear thoughts and feel emotions of other people and animals was intriguing to me. Why use a tiger or vine as a ingenium to the human counterpart?

Heather: You will find out the entire story in the prequel, Resurrection. The short story is that human and animal/plant DNA was being mixed to create super-human soldiers. Tigers are fierce, strong, etc. Scorpions can live for a very long time without food and withstand a great variance in temperature. The Passion Vine was not supposed to happen, but scientists have a way of doing things they probably shouldn't when their passions come into play.

Kris: What kind of research did you do for this book?

Heather: Not a lot. I did research the qualities of animals to make descriptions accurate. I've read innumerable books about how to write since my college degree is in Biochemistry. Other than that, I googled a lot when I needed to know something.

Kris: What was the most challenging thing about writing this book and how did you overcome it?

Heather: I've been asked this before, and my answer seems to change depending on my recent experiences. Sometimes I feel like publishing was the most difficult. Other times I would say that marketing it is a bear (and her cubs). At the same time, I am learning so much and meeting so many wonderful people in the process, I can't regret any of it. In reality it's the people banging down my door for the next novel and my love of the craft that keeps me in the game.

Kris: What was the easiest?

Heather: Writing. Editing. I love that process.

Kris: If you could trade places with any of your characters, which one would it be and why?

Heather: Ardana. I think Kliax is really amazing. (Dare I say? . . . No, I don't. But he's really . . . great.)

Kris: Did you self-publish or traditionally publish?

Heather: I self-published because I thought this would be a hobby. It was all a ruse. I now spend about ten hours a day at it or more.

Kris: I love when authors stop by and share their journey and their writing. Where can we find Perception?

Heather: Amazon for Kindle, Barnes & Noble for Nook, and in Paperback here, and any other format from my website.

Let me tell you that Perception is one story not to be missed. I thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by the locker room, Heather!!

I am not a Campaigner - bummer!

2011-09-12T05:31:00.000-07:00

I had so wanted to take part of Rachel Harrie's Third Platform Building Campaign, but I just do not have the time at the moment. So for all of you that have followed me, I will be sure to follow back - I haven't even done that yet. I wish I had hours to spend blog hopping, but I don't.

I also signed up for this other cool opportunity - Novel Publicity's "secret" society. That is also something that I've not been too involved with, but I think I can handle going forward.

I've got two blog stops coming up this week, and I've have Heather Cashman here on Wednesday talking about writing and her book, Perception.

Guest blogging today

2011-09-09T03:52:00.000-07:00

I'm over at the Gem State Writers blog talking about how I started my writing journey and how I ended up writing middle grade. I'd love if you'd visit me!

Excuse this interuption for a winner announcment-------

2011-09-06T03:40:00.000-07:00

Thanks again to Laynie King for stopping by and letting us all get to know her. She's picked a winner of a copy of her book, Palo Duro Panic, and that person is........

Sheri Larsen!!!!!

Sheri, Laynie will be sending you an email so you all can get together.

Today is the first day of school for my kidlets, so I'm busy getting their little butts off to school. It's a half day, so they won't be gone too long! But tomorrow our fall schedule starts, and I'll get back to blogging on a more usual basis. This Friday I'll be a guest blogger over at the Gem State Writers. I'm looking forward to talking about writing, why I chose middle grade, and how I developed the world within Saving Redwind.

Since it's the first day of school here, I'm wondering what memories you all have of your school days. The older one is starting 7th grade and the younger one is starting 5th grade. 5th grade, for me, was the last year of elementary school, and it was also the year I got my finger smashed inside of the school door. Ouch! It was also the first year I had a "boyfriend".

What are your school memories?

The Blogtour Continues: I'm over here today--->

2011-08-31T05:00:00.000-07:00

Hi all! I'm back on the trail again -- or would that be the ice? Not sure of the correct metaphor right now, but you get what I mean with the title of this entry.

Anyway, please, please, please come visit me over at Laynie King's blog today. I'm answering questions about writing. I hope you'll come visit. You could win a free signed copy of Saving Redwind...:)

Hope to see you over there!

Welcome Author Laynie King!

2011-08-29T05:02:00.000-07:00

Today I'm so happy to welcome children's author, Laynie King, to the locker room. I made sure to clean it all up and light a few vanilla scented candles to get rid of the ~~gross~~ smell. So...now that the mood is all set, Laynie, take it away!!

If there was ONE thing you could do differently in your writing career, what would it be?

I would have started earlier and taken myself more seriously. It took me a long time to realize that some child other than my own might like to read my stories. Fine-tuning them and publishing on Amazon was a big step for me. (And I have my husband to thank for a very hearty push in the right direction.) If I’d taken that step a few years back, I’d have more steps left in front of me!

Between Amazon, CreateSpace, and SmashWords, which (in your opinion) is easier to use? Which is more successful for you?

I'm published on Amazon Kindle and I'm going to stay with them for the long run. I've looked seriously at CreateSpace and SmashWords. I believe at this point, I'm going with SmashWords, as soon as I can take that next big step - formatting. The learning curve looks pretty steep, but I believe I can do it. I'm not completely computer illiterate. (Don't ask my sons about that.)

How do you divide up the hours in a typical day?

I tend to do most of the ‘business’ of writing in the morning. The sun wakes me up very early…our bedroom windows face east across a canyon to an enormous ranch, and we have no drapes to block the view. That’s when I check the social networks and do my blog. Working on the stories themselves happens whenever inspiration strikes. That’s one advantage of being retired. I can go to my desk just about any time and work on a new idea. I do get up in the middle of the night, from time to time, with notebook and pen in hand. I sit in the library (where the cats are trying unsuccessfully to sleep) and jot down ideas that are keeping me awake. I try not to do that very often…the sun comes up way too early on those mornings!

Do you have any hobbies...other than writing, that is?

I’ve been knitting since I was nine years old and can’t seem to stop. Presently I’m knitting blankets that are given to abused children who come through a local service organization. Recently I became interested in Pyrography (wood burning). I entered a few woodburned projects in the County Fair (doesn’t that sound ‘rural?’) and one of them won a blue ribbon! I simplified my life; now I’m easily gratified!

My family thinks I should find a hobby that will be a moneymaker…I’ve yet to find that magical hobby! Seems that the materials and labor are always more cost-intensive than the general public is willing to pay. Hmm, sounds like being an author, huh?

If I had my life to live over, I’d choose an extremely lucrative career and stick with it long enough to retire early, then start a ‘second life’ with my writing and hobbies.

Why do you write?

I tried keeping a journal/diary and found it to be boring. I’ve always been a liar, although I prefer to be thought of as an embellisher. My dad would tell me that I had an overactive imagination. So, I applied my overactive embellishments to life in general and came up with some pretty darn good stories. Next thing I know…I’m a writer!

Kris, thanks for having me on your blog. I appreciate being able to tell you about myself and my book series. Moochie Mockingbird was invented about 20 years ago, when my children were in elementary school. I wrote a short story that ended up in the school library. I wish I could have it back...it was awful. Over the years, I added other stories which were equally bad. After studying writing (and scrapping everything I'd previously written), I took advantage of the Amazon Kindle phenomenon, and I'm now published, selling, and soon-to-be in print.

Laynie's children's story,

Palo Duro Panic

Moochie Mockingbird Tales: Book Three

is available at Amazon.

Thanks so much for stopping by my blog, Laynie! We've learned a lot about you. Who knew that she was into wood burning?!?! I think that's pretty A.W.E.S.O.M.E.! I wouldn't be able to do that in my house - those boys would want to try and would probably burn the house down! Kidding aside, what is truly AWESOME is Laynie knitting blankets for abused kids. Kudos to you, Laynie!!

Here's another AWESOME thing: one lucky commenter will win a copy of her story, Palo Duro Panic, Moochie Mockingbird Tales: Book Three. Leave a comment below and you'll be entered. Good luck!

On Wednesday, I'll be ~~hijacking~~---uh, visiting Laynie's blog. I'm answering questions over there. I promise there won't be any fish eye stories.

Rachael Harrie'sThird Writers' Platform-Building Campaign

2011-08-23T19:19:00.000-07:00

Over at the FB group, Writers Support 4U!, I saw a post about a really cool online concept about building your online platform. I clicked over to Rachael Harrie's blog and found the page to sign up. But before I signed up, I popped over to this blog post to read more about the campaign, which used to be called a "crusade".

Basically, this is all about networking and learning more about your fellow bloggers. But the best (!!!!) is that there will be blogfests - and you know how much I LOVE blogfests.

So, I'm joining. I can't wait to hang out with fellow MG/YA writers, sharing stories, making cyber-memories, and above all, knowing that I'm not the only MG/YA writer out there.

I dare you to click over and join. Oh, and it's for all writers, not just MGers and YAers.

C'mon...you know you want to!

What keeps you going?

2011-08-19T06:19:00.000-07:00

I'm not sure if it's the time of year or what, but I've seen a lot of posts about not giving up as a writer.

Either it's the fact that there's been no word from editors/publishers, that the contracts being offered stink because of the state of the industry, or perhaps a slew of rejects were sent out and the writer is feeling the pain. Pk Hrezo had a great post about not giving up, featuring the movie Soul Surfer and it's true story about Bethany Hamilton.

As our agency has been told by our wonderful and fearless leader, Christine Witthohn, summer is a time where editors and publishers have shortened hours and take more vacations. That gives an explanation about why it's taking so long to hear back on submissions. Sort of. The economy is horrible, and editors are either leaving or being let go.

But what about if you've been out on submission and FINALLY hear back - but it's a no?

Even though publishers and book seller see books as business, that's not how writers see them as. Books are our babies and rejection of our little ones hurts us. We feel it's a reflection of us as a person - just as most parents feel the bad behavior of their children is a reflection of them as parents and people.

I wonder if it would be better for writers if their unpublished, on-submission manuscripts could be seen as business tools. Maybe if we looked at it that way, the slowness of the industry or the rejections wouldn't hurt so badly.

Maybe I'm living in a dream world.

What do you think? How do you keep going?

Wordy Wednesday

2011-08-17T05:19:00.000-07:00

As an editor and writer, words are a big deal to me. Kinda goes with the territory. Ever since I was a little kid, words fascinated me. In 4th grade -not to toot my own horn or anything, but just as an example - I could spell antidisestablishmentarianism. I could take the word and chunk it up within seconds. It was weird. Guess I should've known then that I was a writer. Took me a really long time to figure that one out!

Other than that crazy word, there are words that I love. Other than the usual ones that evoke (there's one) a certain sense (peace, love, joy, harmony, hockey <--threw that one in to see if you're paying attention), there are other words that make me feel gooey (another one!) or just sound cool.

Here are a few of my current favorite words:
evoke
gooey
seriously
implode
contrary
privy

Are you this crazy about words, or am I all alone here? Wouldn't be the first time! What are you favorite words?

We've got a winner!!!

2011-08-15T05:22:00.000-07:00

Thanks to all who commented over at Susan Kaye Quinn's blog. Leslie Rose is the lucky winner! She'll receive a signed copy of Saving Redwind.

Jess also won a copy of Saving Redwind! She was the lucky winner over at Pk Hrezo's blog!

I can't wait to hear what these lovely ladies have to say about my story. :)

My next blog stop will be at Laynie King's site on August 31st. We'll have another giveaway there.

If you can't wait, why not head over to Amazon, B&N, or Createspace to get your print copy? If you prefer an e-edition, you can saunter over to Amazon, B&N, or Smashwords. With the e-edition, you'll be able to download a sample before you plunge into that .99 price. :)

Also, have you heard about Kindlegraph? It's this cool application that allows authors to sign Kindle editions of books. If you have the Kindle edition of Saving Redwind, send me a request here and I'll sign it for you! I'm still trying to figure out book plates for those who have the print version. All of the book plates I've found are all fancy. Guess I need to figure out how to make my own!

Last Chance at Susan Kaye Quinn's Blog

2011-08-11T06:16:00.000-07:00

Today (Thursday) is the last day you can comment on my blog post over at Susan's blog. She'll be picking a winner from the comments from this post tomorrow. Be sure to go over and comment for a chance to receive a signed copy of Saving Redwind! Tell all of your friends to stop by. The more the merrier!

Want a signed copy of Saving Redwind?

2011-08-09T05:11:00.001-07:00

I'm still over at Susan Kaye Quinn's blog. All week long, in fact. She'll be picking a winner from the comments from this post. Be sure to go over and comment for a chance to receive a signed copy of Saving Redwind! Tell all of your friends to stop by. The more the merrier!

Blogtour Continues - Pk Hrezo's and Susan Kay Quinn's sites

2011-08-08T04:34:00.000-07:00

Hi all!
I hope you had a great weekend. I sure had a lot of fun over at Lydia Kang's website. Most everyone was grossed out by the fish eye story. I know I am, and it's been over 20 years since it happened!

Today I'm at the lovely Pk Hrezo's site. If you've been a reader of this blog, you may remember this interview I did with my main character of Saving Redwind, Nick Stevenson. Still, come on over and check it out!

I'm also over at the wonderful Susan Kaye Quinn's blog all week. She had a whole slew of questions for me that were very fun to answer. We're having a giveaway over here for a signed copy of Saving Redwind. Be sure to stop by and leave a comment. We'll pick one lucky winner on Friday.

5 star reviews for Saving Redwind

2011-08-06T05:09:00.000-07:00

I'm pretty geeked. I woke up today to find another 5 star review. What a great day-after-my-birthday present!

If you have a quick second or if you're needing a nudge to buy my book, please check out these reviews. I promise that I didn't pay any of these people! :)

Paperback reviews
Ebook reviews

And, I'm still over at Lydia Kang's website if you didn't get a chance to read my fishy tale!

I've got a fishy story to tell

2011-08-05T04:31:00.000-07:00

I've spilled the beans on something I did in college over at Lydia Kang's blog.
Visit me there!

Blog Tour starts tomorrow!

2011-08-04T18:42:00.000-07:00

Hey Peeps!
I've been working to set-up a blog tour. It's going well, and I'm still looking for spots - so...if you want me to stop by, let me know!

Here's my schedule so far:
Friday, Aug 5                Lydia Kang
Monday, Aug 8             Pk Hrezo
Monday, Aug 8 - 12     Susan Kaye Quinn
Wednesday, Aug 31      Laynie King
Friday, Sept 9               Gem State Writers
Friday, Sept 16             Heather Cashman
Friday, Sept 23             Chris Eboch

Sometime in December The Teen Book Scene

I'm hoping to get a few more and will update the links as they come up.

Writing in 3rd Person POV

2011-08-04T06:14:00.000-07:00

When writers come to me for edits, most of them are writing in the third person. This is probably the easiest, and most common, point of view used by writers. There are two types of third person pov: limited and omniscient. Most writers use limited, and this discussion will focus mainly on limited.

But for the sake of getting all of our terms defined, take a look at this very simple definition of each:

Omniscient third person pov: sees all and knows all; godlike.

Limited third person pov: is told from ONE character's pov; character perspective can change from scene to scene or chapter to chapter; reader only knows what the pov character sees, hears, and thinks.

Third person pov uses "he, she, it" when referring to the point of view character. Observations only come from the point of view character, including visual, auditory, and mental observations. Like first person, the reader only knows what the third person pov character knows, sees, and hears.

Here's an example of limited third person from my women's fiction manuscript, A Life Unraveled:

"Excuse me? Wha-what did you say? Who died?"

Katie Wilcox wanted to argue with the man. And he wasn't even her husband.

With the phone receiver in one hand and the still processing pregnancy test in the other, Katie thought she would explode with impatience.

"That there's been a death in your family," the unfamiliar voice repeated.

Katie's pacing halted. She'd heard the man correctly.

Above, we know that Katie is our pov character. Everything revolves around what she says, hears, and thinks.We don't know the thoughts or visuals of the caller.

The difference between first and third person pov is that third person point of view can allow several characters to be the point of view character within a chapter as along as the scene changes. You will see highly successful writers use this pov and change the pov character mid-paragraph. Pick up any Nora Roberts book and read the first two chapters. Inevitably the reader will be introduced to the female and male main characters, and the reader will be put into both of their pov's, sometimes within the same paragraph or scene. Newbie writers should not attempt to do this. I truly believe that highly successful writers can get away with writing stunts like that because their publishers/editors know they will sell solely based on their name and not their writing. This is in no way bashing Nora Roberts's writing. I love her, but I know enough that I cannot use the same writing techniques that she uses.

During a writing workshop, the instructor talked about writing in deep pov. That will be the topic of a future post.

Do you write in third person? Do you like to read books written in third person? What's your preference?

Writing in 1st Person POV

2011-08-03T06:30:00.001-07:00

At my day job, point of view (pov) is the hardest thing for my authors to grasp. Many of them believe that "head-hopping" (going from one pov to another pov) is acceptable. I admit that there are a multitude of published books that do just this. Pick up any Nora Roberts book and you will see this in action for yourself. Her chapters will start out with, for example, the female character's pov, but a few paragraphs later, the male's pov takes over. She may even shift several more times within the same scene or chapter.

I believe that established writers can get away with this, but that new writers can not.

If you're just starting out, a refresher (or even a first time lesson) about point of view is a good thing to help with your craft.

There are several forms of point of view, but today I'll be concentrating on first person.

I love to write in first person point of view. I really feel like I get into my character's head and become them as the story enfolds. But, interestingly enough, writing experts say that newbie writers should not use first person point of view. It is too confusing, and writers are setting themselves up for failure due to the amount of mistakes that they make.

I say, write what you want - both content and point of view. BUT...make sure you understand pov before embarking on your writing journey. Pov slips happen, and a newbie writer can't allow too many slips, or the reader will know you're a newbie.

A Quick Refresher on First Person Point of View

First person point of view is written from the scene character's (usually the main character) point of view. Everything that is written is what the character sees, hears, says, and thinks. "I" is used primarily.

Example:

"Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Mom!" I yelled. "Mom! Come here, quick!"

The sky turned almost black, and the clouds swirled like a storm was about to explode. A brisk breeze whipped around, causing my math homework sheet to take off like a bird. I wanted to sit up and catch it, but I was too afraid to move.

"What the heck is happening?" I whispered aloud. "This isn't right."

Okay, so with the above example (the first part of my story, Saving Redwind) you can see that the character's point of view is used. "I" and "my math homework" show that the writer is using first person point of view.

Here's the deal with first person pov that you MUST remember: the author can only write what the scene character sees, hears, says, or thinks. Unless the scene character is in the room with Uncle Willard, the scene character will not see or hear Uncle Willard scratch his head or burp. It just doesn't work. Also, unless the scene character sees themselves in some sort of reflection, truly the character is not going to realize they are smiling. Check yourself throughout the day; do you realize really when you are smiling? Most of the time you don't. Your character isn't going to notice that either unless they are leering at someone.

What about blushing? In first person, many writers describe the feeling of blushing to get around this, because once again, do we see ourselves blushing? No. We feel it, and that's what a writer needs to describe when having their first person pov character blush.

Like I said, I love writing in first person pov. But my first manuscript that I wrote was written in third person, not first person. We'll discuss third person next time I do writing basics.

What about you? Which pov do you write in? Which pov did you like to read?

Kris Yankee - The Independent Author Network

2011-08-02T17:02:00.000-07:00

Kris Yankee - The Independent Author Network

So much to do, so little time

2011-08-02T06:27:00.000-07:00

I wanted to pop in here to let you know that I'm busily working on my blog tour. But I also wanted to let you know that you can find me at the Independent Authors Network now. Please check out my page - I think it looks really cool! You can find it here. Let me know what you think.

Also, I've gotten another great review on Amazon. You'll find it here.

Last but not least, my BookCents mate, Kari Lee Townsend, has her new book launching today. Tempest in the Tea Leaves looks like a great read. Mine downloaded to my Kindle app this morning, and I can't wait to start reading it.

My first review

2011-07-26T04:26:00.000-07:00

I'm so excited to show you my first review for Saving Redwind. If you have a moment, please click over to Amazon. I'm thrilled to know that someone out there really enjoyed my story.

Isn't that we as writers want? It is for me. I'm not doing this for fame or fortune, and if you are, you need to have a serious talk with yourself. Would I take some fame and fortune? You bet; I'm not completely stupid. But what I really want is my books in kids' hands. I want them to love, or at least like, my stories. That's it. Simple.

What was your first review like? How did you feel?

Side note: My blog tour is coming along nicely. I'll be making visits in August and September. Then, right in time for the holiday season, I'll most likely have a two week tour in December. I would love to introduce my characters, talk about writing and/or editing, or just plain hang out at YOUR blog - AND, I'd love it if you hung out at my blog. If this sounds like a great idea to you, then let me know in the comments or send me an email at kris (at) krisyankee (dot) com. I promise it will be fun!

Does Twitter Make Me a Better Writer?

2011-07-23T06:45:00.001-07:00

I have realized that the time I spend on Twitter actually does make me a better writer. Hear me out, okay?

Those 140 characters, that's what gets me. Watching the number of available spaces diminish as my hands flutter over the keyboard really makes me aware of the words I use.

Lately, I've found myself editing my tweets. Not the usual changing "to" to "2" or "and" to "&" - since those new keystrokes take up less characters, but I've been more in tune with the number of words I've used and how I could say the same thing with less.

This can only mean good things when it comes to my writing, right? I would think so. Since an overabundance of words can slow the pacing.

This isn't the only reason why I'm a better writer - there are so many people who post links to really great articles about writing. These articles talk about craft as well as the publishing industry as a whole. Learning as much as a writer can about the business side is also important. Conversations between people also provide a lot of information. Just recently, I saw a person ask about self-editing books. She was flooded with recommendations. Other writers post tidbits about craft in their 140 characters.

Twitter chats are a plethora of information. I try to attend #kidlitchat and #yalitchat each week. #kidlitchat is on Tuesdays at 9pm, EST. #yalitchat is on Wednesdays at 9pm, EST. Both of these chats are attended by writers, illustrators, agents, and publishers. It's AMAZING the amount of information that flies by in those 140 characters. Never, other than in the internet world, would a wannabe writer have access to these industry professionals. Part of me wonders why more writers aren't participating in these chats. You are missing out, people!

So, does Twitter make me a better writer? Craft-wise, probably not that much. But it does make me feel more connected and informed of more than what I would normally know from here in my living room in Michigan.

Do you tweet? Do you find it something you "have to do" or are you enjoying this new explosion of industry information?

Regurgitated Blog Post: Writing Basics Tip #1

2011-07-22T13:45:00.000-07:00

Beginning - Middle - End = Hook & Story Problem

Whenever I say this in one of my company's writing workshops, I inevitably get an eye roll or two. Yes, of course, Kris, we know that a story has to have a beginning, middle, and end. It's not just writing that first sentence and then hoping that all the other sentences create the middle and then the end. A writer must have a story problem. Even though many participants nod when I say, "Does your story have a story problem?", most give me blank or expectant stares.

So, since it's my workshop, I make them suffer through a brief discussion on this topic. Because where else does a writer start, but at the beginning?

I have reviewed many manuscripts where there was no beginning, a middle, or even a ending. The "story" just sort of started and then sort of ended. No story problem, no wraparound. No real beginning, no real ending. These were not good manuscripts, and they were not accepted by my company.

Other manuscripts, as well as most published books, have a beginning - a hook - oopss, there's another word writers should know - which draws the reader into the story almost immediately. In a picture book, the first two pages with their text and illustration must explain what the problem is (the hook). In a chapter book, I've heard that the first paragraph must draw the reader in, but I really think it is the first sentence. I think the very first sentence is one of the hardest to write.

Pick up any book and read the first sentence.

Here are a few I have lying around:
"I remember lying in the snow, a small red spot of warm going cold, surrounded by wolves." Shiver by Maggie Stiefvater

"It wasn't much, really, the whole Jessica Feeney thing." Firegirl by Tony Abbott

"You have been chosen for your special skills to do something that urgently needs to be done." Swindle by Gordon Korrman

All of these first sentences--or the hook--makes the reader want to read on.All of them are from chapter books.

Briefly:
The beginning needs to present the problem that the main character needs to fix. Throughout the middle, the character must continue to reach the resolution to the problem, and usually finds more problems on the way. The ending needs to tie it all up. The original problem should be solved and no new problems should be introduced, unless the author is writing a series. Ending in a cliff hanger is especially good for a series as it will make the reader want to immediately buy the next book.

Take a look at the first line of your first chapter. Does is pull the reader in? Does is set-up the problem? If you answer no to either question, I suggest that you revisit this first line. It needs to whack the reader in the head and make them say, "Huh?" or "What?" or "Groovy!"

Story problem problems? I tell my workshop writers to come up with a question that has a yes or no answer, and that should be the story problem.

Example:
From Charlie and the Chocolate Factory: I think the story problem/question is, Will Charlie find a golden ticket which will change the lives of him and his family?

From The Lightning Thief: Will Percy finally understand his differences and how they will impact the world around him?

The story problem can be a basic one that is explored through the text, but it must be there. It's like a guide in the beginning to the rest of the story, and it will help the author tie everything up in the end.

What are some of your first lines and/or story problems? Have you ever thought about your story problem specifically?

Finding Your Inner Voice

2011-07-21T06:09:00.001-07:00

If you've been a blog reader for awhile, you'll notice these next few posts are regurgitated posts from about a year ago. Life is busy, but I still want to give you all something to chew on. Here's a post from August 2010 about finding your inner voice.

As an editor, I am very aware of my authors' voices. When doing a line or content edit, I try very hard not to change their words into my words. When I meet with authors, I tell them up-front, "I won't change your voice." Sometimes they look at me like I'm crazy. I'm used to that. But other times, more often, they thank me and we get on with our meeting.

Recently, I had a conversation with my agent. I was feeling unsure of the genre that I've decided to concentrate my time and effort into now. My instinct, before at least, was to write stories that dealt with adult women and their issues - something I know a lot about! But when she poised the question - or request - of writing in a new genre because the women's fiction market was flat, I decided to try middle grade. I didn't think it would be that hard; I've got two youngish boys in my house and a husband who is a big kid himself (sorry, honey, but you know it's the truth.) I wrote a full manuscript (book one in a series) and then a partial for a completely different series. I felt pretty good about the stories, or the potential for each story.

Since those two manuscripts, along with a women's fiction mss, are floating out in editorville, it's easy to doubt my new found MG voice. Is it authentic? Will readers gravitate toward it? Will they realize that an "old" lady wrote it and not some young, hippy chick?

I certainly believe that my women's fiction voice is not the same as my middle grade voice. In MG, my characters say "crap". In my women's fiction, my characters say "shit" or something much stronger since shit is not my favorite swear word. : )

I'm so much more aware of how my boys talk now. Whether it's talking to each other, to my husband or me, or to their friends, their lingo is becoming my MG voice. It's still my voice, but at a much younger age. And who wouldn't want to be younger these days?

Music also helps me find my voice, especially if it's for someone much younger. I listen to Linkin Park, Black Eyed Peas, Katy Perry, Lady Gaga, Pink, Train...just to name a few.

When my characters seem like real people, my voice comes so naturally. I've created these "people", so I get to live out their adventures. It's way cool.

In whatever genre, author voice is distinct to each writer. Do not try to write like someone else. When you do that, the writing is not authentic. I learned early on that copying (not plagiarizing), but copying someone else doesn't make me sound real.

Do you notice your voice? How do you feel when others (editors or critique partners) try to change your voice?

Oh, and that conversation with my agent, yeah, she told me I had a younger voice. I tend to agree.

Blogtour coming in August

2011-07-20T05:33:00.000-07:00

Now that Saving Redwind is available in print, I'll be heading through the blogsphere. I'm pretty excited because I'll be making about six stops. I'm still lining them all up (and looking for more). Each stop will have a contest to win your very own autographed copy of my book and hopefully a little treat. No, it won't be chocolate chip cookies, but most likely something to help keep your spot while reading.

For those authors out there, I'd like to ask a question: how have you handled your marketing? What sort of tips can you give a newbie?

As always, thanks for stopping by!

Saving Redwind Now Available in Print

2011-07-17T05:16:00.000-07:00

I'm ecstatic to announce that Saving Redwind: A Wallpaper Adventure is now available in print! You can purchase here at Createspace now or wait a few more days and purchase it here at Amazon.

The book looks great and I hope that you'll enjoy it in paperback really soon!

Getting Closer

2011-07-06T06:14:00.000-07:00

I've got two books now that have my name on it or in it someplace - Chicken Soup for the Soul of Mother's of Preschoolers and Tommy Starts Something Big. Soon I will have a print copy of Saving Redwind. The difference between the first two books and the last one is that Saving Redwind is all mine. I was very excited to get copies of the first two books, but I think I will be over the moon with the last one.

Now I have to be honest and say that I would be extremely ecstatic if Saving Redwind were being published by a traditional publisher. I guess I can't get over the dream of having a NY editor say, "We love this book! We want it for our list!" I'm still on submission with my agent for another story (and hopefully this new one that I'm working on by the end of summer!), but I'll never stop hoping for that call.

Back to reality - once the print book is here and ready to go, I'll be setting up a blog tour. I've already got two blogs that have asked me to come and visit. I'm working on getting more. I'll post the information here so you can "follow" me around if you have the time.

Thanks for visiting and following. I don't say that enough, and I truly am so appreciative of the time you spend here with me.

What I'd love to know is if any of you have self-pubbed a book. If yes, please leave your info in the comments. I'd like to check them out!

Breather...

2011-07-05T07:04:00.000-07:00

I've got a lot of stuff on my plate right now, so please don't forget about me if I don't blog consistently for the next month or so. I'm in the process of getting Saving Redwind into a real book that you can hold in your hands. All of the files are up at CreateSpace, and I'm just waiting to hear if the cover is all right. We had to upload a new one, because there were issues with the first one. Once that's accepted, I'll be able to order a proof copy. That will be too cool. After the proof is accepted, the book will be ready for sale.

So...if you haven't purchased the ebook of Saving Redwind, please hold off because you'll be able to purchase a physical copy soon. I'll post when it's available, as well as my blog tour information that I'll be doing to promote Saving Redwind.

Blogfests are fun...when's another taking place?

2011-06-29T10:03:00.000-07:00

Okay, I haven't been as good about trolling the blogsphere lately. You can also translate into --> Kris hasn't blogged much lately either.

I really, really, REALLY (did you get that?) participating in blogfests. So, do you know of any?

MC Blogfest continuing for me!

2011-06-27T05:59:00.000-07:00

Like I mentioned on Friday, there were two characters just banging on the door to be interviewed. And because I don't like conflict that much, I agreed to interview TK (aka Toby Karlson). TK is just back from fifth grade camp, so he's a little bit tired, but just as excited. Please give a warm welcome to Toby Karlson of TK's Hockey Rules for Life!

TK: I'm so happy to be here. Thanks for including me.

Mrs. Y: I'm glad you could make it. Are you exhausted from camp?

TK: Just a little. But I appreciate you thinking of me. (Puts head down, acting like he's shy)

Mrs. Y: Umm..what's up with this new attitude? Before camp you were all gung-ho and in my face. Telling me all about your hockey team, your best friend Drew, and how you loved ruling the school.

TK: (blushes) Yeah, well, stuff happened before I left for camp that really made me look at things differently.

Mrs. Y: All right. That's a good segue into our first question - what's your greatest fear?

TK: Segue? You mean that motorized thing you stand on?

Mrs. Y.: (Laughs) No, it's a smooth transition from one topic to another. So, what's your greatest fear?

TK: Oh, okay, sorry. I know it's not being kicked out of the cool group. Done that already and survived. And not having the only kid talking to me be the smartest kid in the school. Done that too. Actually gained a friend who I never thought would be one. Maybe it's that once I finally get over to middle school, the secretary will be there and every day I'll be reminded of what I did.

Mrs. Y.: I'm going to mix up the questions here because I think you've given us another perfect segue. What's your biggest regret?

TK: You would think that being only in fifth grade I'd wouldn't know how to answer this question. But before camp, I was sort of involved in an incident. (He puts up his hands defensively.) YOU know it wasn't my fault I hipchecked the district's oldest living secretary, but EVERYONE else thought I did it on purpose. But worst of all when my best friend Drew wouldn't even come clean, I didn't treat him very nicely. So, I guess that's my biggest regret.

Mrs. Y: It's a good lesson to learn. But what about your greatest accomplishment--AND please don't include winning any hockey trophies. I know you have a lot. I want you to tell us something about YOU.

TK: (Snaps fingers and scrunches his lips together) Dang it...I have some pretty sweet trophies, but I get it. I do. Hmm...well, I'd have to say I feel pretty darn good about getting Drew to admit to his oldest brother that he's afraid of his other brother - which really was the reason for the hipcheck to the secretary. But can I say one thing about hockey? Please??!?! (pleading and begging uncontrollably).

Mrs. Y: Of course. You know how we feel about hockey here.

TK: Thanks, Mrs. Y! You're the best. (huge grin) Okay, so another accomplishment is that I've learned so much playing hockey for the last four, five years, that I think I'm becoming a better person. I mean, I know that I shouldn't hipcheck little old ladies, that arguing with the ref won't get me a dance trophy, and that sometimes taking one for the team means putting your head in the toilet. What I'm trying to say is that I can relate the rules I've learned playing the game to my life off the ice. Hope that makes sense.

Mrs. Y: It does to me, and if one of those publishers who has TK's Hockey Rules for Life ever decides that they must have it for their list, everyone will know what you're talking about.

TK: Yeah, well they'd be---(standing up and getting way overexcited)

Mrs. Y: (interrupting quickly) Thanks for stopping by, TK.

TK: Yeah, I get it.(nodding over and over) Thanks, Mrs. Y!

So there you have it. Hopefully someday you'll all get to learn more about TK.

Thanks for stopping by!