Is Your Manuscript Really Finished? Ask Yourself These Questions

I've been reviewing a lot of manuscripts for the day job lately and I'm saddened as to what some writers believe is a "finished" copy. If you're a writer, please ask yourself these questions before sending to a publisher and/or agent or uploading to Amazon:

1. Is there a clear story question?
2. Does each scene contain one point of view?
3. Does each chapter follow the scene and sequel method?
4. Are the characters likable, especially the main character?
5. Is the plot well developed?
6. Are the characters well developed?
7. Do the characters change as the plot changes?
8. Are there enough conflicts throughout the story to warrant the change in the character?
9. Is there a resolution to the story question? 
10. Does each scene push the story forward to the ending resolution?
11. If writing for kids, does it sound like an adult wrote this book, or a kid? 
12. If writing for kids, does the main character speak like his/her age group?
13. Is there a good balance of narrative, dialogue, and action?
14. In the end, does the reader care about the characters?

Some of these questions may seem basic...and they are...but manuscript after manuscript that I've reviewed in the last week (AND even some e-books that I've downloaded over the summer) the author seems to not understand these basic questions.

It's not rocket science, but there is an art form to writing fiction. And, I'm not saying that it's formulated, BUT...authors need to understand these basics before submitting to publishers, agents, AND even uploading their book to Amazon. Hire an honest editor; you won't be sorry.

Summer Starts Off with an Award

I can't believe that we're half-way through July. Where are the days going?

I just found out that Cracking the Code was awarded an Honorable Mention in Children's Books in the 2013 DIY Book Festival! http://www.diyconvention.com/2013-diy-book-festival-winners/

I've entered a few book contests - by the way, that's an excellent way to get your book out there, too. I highly suggest looking into contests once your book is published.

My boys are busy doing nothing and I'm glad to have the reprieve from our "school" routine. But just because their lollygagging doesn't mean I am! If you're in the Michigan area, I'll be signing books this Thursday at Unique Deals and Gifts 15374 Haggerty Rd, Northville from 6-8pm. I'm excited to meet other local vendors. Stop by and say, "Hi!" if you can. Next month I'll be at a water park (crazy place but filled with a ton of kids!). I doubt I'll be in a swimsuit, but I'll sure be drinking a lot of water. I'll be sure to post pics from the event.

Summertime Reading

As we kick into summer in the next week or so, why not help your elementary & middle school student make a commitment to read on his/her off months? Studies show that readers score better on tests and in general do better in class.

My own kids suffer the "I-don't-want-to-read-over-summertime" rant. But this summer that's going to change, even though my oldest will be starting high school in September. We're making a commitment to read every day.

My books make a great choice, but there are a lot of wonderful stories out there just waiting to be read.

What will your kids be reading?

Looking for a content editor?

I've been out and about lately and have met several people who are looking for an editor. Even though I work for a small press, I am available for freelance editing. If you're looking for an editor, please consider me. I can be contacted at krismyankee (@) gmail (dot) com.

Here's my info!

Work Experience:

August 2007 – present: Director of Acquisitions/Project Manager at Nelson Publishing & Marketing, Northville, Michigan. Responsibilities include:

·        Review of incoming manuscripts to determine viability

·        Content editing and/or ghostwriting

·        Liaison between author and illustrator

·        Proof and layout contact

·        Projects Managed: Please see page 2

May 2011 – May 2012: Editor in Chief, Living Faith-Fine Arts Apostolate, Farmington Hills, Michigan. Responsibilities include:

·        Website copy, www.livingstations.org

·        Email copy

·        Script and lyrics edit/proof for Living Stations

·        Communications copy, including Facebook, Twitter, Google+, and all materials required for Living Stations

Education:

BA in Romance Linguistics/English earned from The University of Michigan, Ann Arbor, 1990.

Publications:

·        Tommy Starts Something Big: Giving Cuddles with Kindness, co-written with Chuck Gaidica

·        Saving Redwind: A Wallpaper Adventure

·        Cracking the Code: Spreading Rumors

Awards Earned:

2011 Silver Medal Winner, Moonbeam Book Award for Tommy Starts Something Big

2011 Honorable Mention, 2011 Eric Hoffer Book Award Tommy Starts Something Big

Fees:

All ghostwriting projects are billed on a per-word basis of 42¢ a word. Industry standard is 250 words per page. For projects that include research, $30 an hour for each hour of research will be billed above the project fee.

All editing projects are billed as follows:

100,000 words - $550.00
90,000 words - $500.00
80,000 words - $450.00
70,000 words - $400.00
60,000 words - $350.00
50,000 words - $300.00
40,000 words - $250.00
30,000 words - $200.00
20,000 words - $150.00
10,000 words - $100.00

Line edits consist of a line-by-line edit, catching any grammar, typos, and sentence structure issues, as well as comments on any content/story/format issues. This edit is done in Track Changes.
The following projects were edited and managed by Kris and have received the following awards:

1.  Oh No, Ah Yes! Winner of Mom’s Choice Silver Award 2010 Developing Social Skills

2.  Dadsongs: Remembering a Loved One’s Melody

• Winner of 2010 Mom’s Choice Silver Award Growing up/Personal growth
• 2010 USA Book News Finalist: Death& Dying

3.  Divorced Together for the Sake of the Children

• Winner of 2010 Mom’s Choice Silver Award, Family Life
• 2010 USA Book News Finalist: Parenting/Family: Divorce

4.  Running Home: 2009 USA Book News Award Finalist

5.  Production Algebra: Winner of 2009 USA Book News Award Winner

6.  Lost Treasure of Finistere: Winner of Moonbeams Book Awards 2008, Juvenile Fiction/Early Reader/1^st chapter books

7.  Managing Thought

• Axiom Business Book Awards: Bronze Medal
• USA Book News 2008: Business and Motivational Category
• 2009 Eric Hoffer Winner Small Press

8.  Managing Thought (audio) USA Book News Awards Finalist in the Audio Book Self-help/Motivational category

9.  Bartholomew’s Gift

• 2010 Moonbeams Award for best illustrations
• 2010 USA Book News Finalist Children’s Picture Book: Hardcover with Audio
• 2010 USA Book News Finalist in Children’s Best Cover Design
• 2010 Mom’s Choice Award: Gold in Religious and Spirituality

10.  Read to Me Daddy, My First Football Book: 2010 USA Book News Finalist, Children’s Education

11.  The One and Only Bernadette P. McMullen: 2010 USA Book News Finalist, Children’s Fiction

12.  Hank the Tank Engine:

• 2010 USA Book News Finalist, Children’s Non-Fiction Picture Book
• 2011 International Book Awards: Winner Children’s Picture Book: Softcover Non-Fiction category

13.  Opening Doors, Opening Lives: 2010 USA Book News Finalist Education PreK-12

14.  Growing Up with a Bucket Full of Happiness

• Honorable Mention: Young Adult/Teenage category, 2010 New England Book Festival
• Honorable Mention: Teenage category, 2010 London Book Festival
• 2010 DIY Book Festival, Honorable Mention: Young Adult
• 2011 NABE Pinnacle Book Achievement: Best Book in the Category of Children’s Interest (2011)
• 2011 Mom’s Choice Awards: Gold – Juvenile Level 2 Books
• 2011 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards: Grand Prize – Children’s Books
• 2011 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards: First Place in Charity/Making a Difference category
• 2011 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards: First Place in School Issues category
• 2010 Los Angeles Book Festival Honorable Mention – Young Adult category
• 2011 Young Voices Foundation Awards: Gold Award – Juvenile/YA Nonfiction
• 2011 USA Book News Awards: Finalist – Children’s Mind/Body/Spirit
• 2012 IPPY: Gold Award for Juvenile/YA Non-Fiction
• 2012 San Francisco Book Festival: Second Place, Teenage Category
• 2012 Southern California Book Festival: Runner-up, Young Adult Category
• 2013 Great Southwest Book Festival: Runner-up, Young Adult books
• 2013 Great Northwest Book Festival: Runner-up, Young Adult books
• 2013 Great Southeast Book Festival: Runner-up, Young Adult books
• 2013 Paris Book Festival: Honorable Mention, Young Adult books

15. Tommy Starts Something Big: Giving Cuddles with Kindness

• 2011 Eric Hoffer Awards: Honorable Mention – Children’s Category
• 2011 Moonbeam Children’s Book Awards: Silver Medal – Books with Merchandise

16. Does This Make Me Beautiful?: 2011 Mom’s Choice Award: Gold – Growing Up/Personal Growth

17. I Can Dance, Too !: 2011 Mom’s Choice Award: Gold – Children’s Picture Book

18. What Color is Your Heart?: 2011 Mom’s Choice Awards – Gold – Children’s Picture Book

19. Liam’s Luck and Finnegan’s Fortune: 2011 Mom’s Choice Awards – Silver – Fantasy, Myths, & Legends

20. My Guy in the Sky: 2011 USA Book News Awards Finalist in Children’s Religious category

21. A Heart Torn, A Soul Mended: A Bereaved Parent’s Search for Harmony:

• 2011 USA Book News Awards Finalist in Health: Addiction & Recovery
• 2011 USA Book News Awards Finalist in Health: Death & Dying

22. Hero in Me:

·        2012 Mom’s Choice Awards – Gold – Juvenile Level 1

·        2012 Moonbeam Book Awards – Silver – Mind, Body, Spirit/Self-Esteem

·        2012 USA Book News Awards Winner in Children’s Picture Book: Softcover Fiction

23. Halle and Tiger with Their Bucketfilling Family:

• 2012 International Book Awards, Finalist in Children’s Educational
• 2012 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards, 2nd Place in Animals/Pets Category
• 2012 Living Now Book Awards, Silver in Animals/Pets/Livestock
• 2012 Young Voices Foundation Award, Gold in Children’s Picture Book (all ages)

24. Be a Gem: Let Your Goodness Shine:

·        2012 International Book Awards, Winner in Children’s Picture Book, Softcover Fiction

·        2013 Mom’s Choice Awards, Silver in Children’s Picture Books: Developing Social Skills

25. Timothy’s Glove:

• 2012 International Book Awards, Finalist in Children’s Religious
• 2012 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards, Honorable Mention in Spiritual/Religious Category
• 2012 Young Voices Foundation Award, Gold in Religious Fiction Juvenile

26. Will You Fill My Bucket? Daily Acts of Love Around the World:

• 2012 New York Book Festival – Honorable Mention, Children’s Books
• 2012 Mom’s Choice Awards – Gold – Children’s Picture Book/Inspirational/Motivational
• 2012 NABE Pinnacle Book Achievement Awards: Best Books in Children’s Interest
• 2012 Southern California Book Festival: Honorable Mention, Wild Card Category
• 2013: Great Southwest Book Festival: Honorable Mention in Children’s books
• 2013: Great Northwest Book Festival: Honorable Mention in Children’s books
• 2013: Great Southeast Book Festival: Honorable Mention in Children’s books
• 2013: Los Angeles Book Festival: Honorable Mention in Children’s books
• 2013: Paris Book Festival: Honorable Mention in Children’s books
• 2013: IBPA Benjamin Franklin Awards: Silver Finalist in Children’s Picture books

27. Just Because: Where Another Point of View Makes a Better You:

·        2012 Creative Child Awards Program Book of the Year (Kids Books-Family Values category)

·        2012 Mom’s Choice Awards, Gold in Children’s Picture Books/Philanthropic

·        2012 Young Voices Foundation Awards, Bronze in Children’s Picture Books (7 and Under)

28. I Am Stumped!:

• 2012 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards, 1st Place in School Issues Category
• 2012 Purple Dragonfly Book Awards, 2nd Place in Children’s Picture Books, 5 years and younger Category

·        2012 Mom’s Choice Awards – Silver – Children’s Picture Book/Developing Social Skills

·        2012 Young Voices Foundation Award, Silver in Children’s Picture Book (7 and Under)

·        2012 Young Voices Foundation Award, Gold in Regional Children’s/Great Lakes

29. My Bucketfilling Journal: 30 Days to a Happier Life: 2012 Living Now Book Awards, Silver in Journal/Planner/Calendar category.

39. Good for You, Grisha!:

• 2012 Mom’s Choice Awards,  Silver in Children’s Picture Books: Developing Social Skills
• 2012 USA Book News Awards, Finalist in Children’s Mind/Body/Spirit

40. The Juice Box Bully: 2012 Mom’s Choice Awards, Gold in Children’s Picture Books (ages 5-8)

41. Keeper of the Compass: 2012 USA Book News Awards, Winner in Best New Children’s Book: Fiction

42. Celia the Great: Tricks for Being a Happy Kid: 2013 Mom’s Choice Awards, Silver in Children’s Picture Books: Developing Social Skills

43. No Fear, No Doubt, No Regret: Investing in Life’s Challenges like a Warrior: 2013 Pinnacle Book Achievement Book Awards, Best Books in Parenting & Family

44. September’s Big Assignment: 2013 Eric Hoffer Award, Montaigne Medal Finalist

An advanced copy of a new review from The US Review of Books

 

The US Review of Books

Cracking the Code: Spreading Rumors
by Kris Yankee
Ferne Press

reviewed by John E. Roper

"I didn't know exactly what, but it was like I was stepping out on the ice for the very first game of the season. I took a couple of silent deep breaths to calm the butterflies in my stomach." 

An interesting phenomenon sometimes occurs when a person graduates from high school. Along with the feeling of freedom from final tests and the anticipation for what lays ahead, some people experience a startling, emotional release as they feel the bonds of peer pressure and social scrutiny they've been tied up with for most of their lives suddenly unravel. Those first twelve years of school have frequently been described as "living in a fish bowl," an environment where those swimming in the same "school" can suddenly turn on you. The author manages to realistically recreate this atmosphere for her readers in her latest novel. 

Toby Karlson is a popular fifth grader who has been used to enjoying a good reputation among his peers. Then one day an unfortunate accident at the sixth-grade orientation causes his friends, teachers, and fellow classmates to suddenly see him in a negative light. Betrayed by his best friend who refuses to own up to his own part in the incident, Toby comes up with various schemes to restore his place in the social order, only to watch each ploy fail and plunge him further into the mire of infamy. It will take a trip to fifth-grade camp, a new friendship, and a new understanding of past relationships to help Toby get back into the cool club. 

Yankee does an excellent job of showing how a relatively minor incident can explode into a situation of high drama among young people. Yet she also shows that with the proper attitude even seemingly unresolvable conflicts can be fixed and become valuable life lessons. Believable characters, fast pacing, and solid writing make this book an enjoyable addition to youth literature. 

Woohoo! Isn't that awesome? I am completely humbled.